My heart…

I think my heart is firm and round
I feel my heart is soft and deep
I know my heart is sad and limp

My heart needs not another pounding
My heart needs not another slashing
My heart needs some salve and balm

Until Black and Blue turns Red and whole
Until oozing sores turn healthy flesh
And my heart bounces once again!

A miserable attempt at poetry…Never loved reading poetry but wanted to document the state of my heart and couldnt think of writing any prose.

So miserable or not its (c)Lamikayty 2009.! lol!

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3 Comments on "My heart…"

  1. blogoratti
    28/05/2009 at 12:48 pm Permalink

    Not bad actually,nice try*
    Don’t stop though,keep writing!

  2. Chyka
    29/05/2009 at 1:51 pm Permalink

    Practice makes perfect :-)

  3. jabez
    10/06/2009 at 12:51 pm Permalink

    i love the pattern and your play with words!! keep it up!!!

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